Give prospective investors a clearer picture of your company, the opportunity you are pursuing and what sets your business apart.
ARTÉMIA evaluates your deck’s narrative, positioning and supporting messages, identifying where the story becomes unclear, which claims need more context and what questions may go unanswered.
You understand the technology, the market and the decisions behind your business. Prospective investors need your presentation to connect those ideas clearly.
A deck can contain useful information and still leave an audience struggling to understand the opportunity. Product details may overshadow customer value. Competitive advantages may be implied rather than explained. Individual slides may make sense without building a coherent business story.
An independent review helps you identify those gaps before your next investor conversation.
Practical feedback tied to your existing deck, with the context to help you determine what should change and why.
A structured evaluation across five areas, including an explanation of the findings.
Specific comments on up to 20 slides flag unclear wording, excess technical detail, missing context, inconsistent messaging and opportunities to improve the narrative order.
Five changes to focus your revisions on the issues most likely to improve how your presentation communicates the business opportunity.
Potential investor questions and objections raised by the deck's presentation of customer value, positioning, competition, the business model or other narrative elements.
Meet virtually with an ARTÉMIA strategist to discuss the findings, understand the recommendations and ask questions about applying the feedback.
Submit an inquiry. We confirm fit, explain the process and arrange payment.
Submit up to 20 slides and a short questionnaire about your stage, investor audience and goals. Discuss confidentiality first if needed.
An ARTÉMIA strategist reviews narrative clarity, value, positioning, credibility and potential questions.
Get your scorecard, annotated deck, five recommendations and investor question assessment.
Meet virtually for 30 minutes to discuss the findings and how to apply them.
Get an independent strategic communications assessment without commissioning a full deck rewrite or engaging a fundraising adviser.
The scope and deliverables are defined in advance so you know exactly what the review covers.
Scope: Narrative and messaging feedback only. Complete rewrites, slide redesign, financial modeling, valuation analysis and fundraising advisory services are not included.
Submitting an inquiry does not commit you to a purchase. We'll follow up to confirm the scope and payment steps.
San Francisco-based strategic communications and integrated marketing consultancy
Since 1995, ARTÉMIA has helped organizations strengthen positioning, develop strategic messaging and explain complex concepts across startups, technology businesses, established corporations and regulated industries.
We bring that communications perspective to your deck, examining what investors need to understand, where the story asks them to make assumptions and whether the presentation clearly communicates your company's value.
Reviews are conducted by experienced communications professionals with expertise in positioning, differentiation and strategic narrative.
It is a strategic communications assessment of how effectively your presentation explains your business opportunity to prospective investors. ARTÉMIA evaluates narrative clarity, value proposition, positioning, differentiation and the questions raised by your deck, then provides specific feedback and prioritized recommendations.
The fixed price is $795. It includes review of up to 20 slides, a narrative scorecard, annotated feedback, five prioritized recommendations, an investor question assessment and a 30-minute virtual review session.
The review covers up to 20 slides. If your deck is longer, contact ARTÉMIA to discuss the scope before proceeding.
No. The service provides an assessment and recommendations. A complete rewrite, slide redesign and visual production are not included.
AI can generate suggestions and help you explore different ways to describe your business. An experienced communications strategist adds judgment about which issues deserve attention and why. ARTÉMIA examines how claims, positioning and supporting information work together. The findings session lets you discuss the reasoning behind the recommendations.
No. We assess how financial information and business claims are communicated within the narrative. We do not validate projections, assess valuations or provide investment advice.
The review identifies claims that appear to need more context or supporting evidence. It does not include independent verification of market data, financial information or other business claims.
Investor introductions, fundraising representation and capital-raising services are outside the scope of this review.
The review helps you identify and address communications weaknesses. Funding decisions depend on many factors beyond the deck, so investor interest or funding cannot be guaranteed.
Yes. ARTÉMIA has experience explaining complex products, technologies and business concepts. The review is particularly relevant when a founder needs to communicate commercial value to an audience that may not share their technical background.
Your presentation will be used for conducting the review. ARTÉMIA can discuss confidentiality requirements and any necessary agreements before you submit sensitive materials.
ARTÉMIA will contact you to discuss your needs, confirm the scope and arrange payment. You’ll then receive instructions for submitting your deck and completing the intake questionnaire.
Additional messaging, positioning or content development support can be discussed and scoped separately.
Identify where your story needs more explanation, focus your highest-priority revisions and prepare for questions the presentation may raise.
Tell us about your company and the pitch deck you’d like reviewed. We’ll follow up to answer your questions, confirm fit and explain the next steps.
